HELLO AND WELCOME TO MY BLOG IM AMELIA I AM 8 YEARS OLD MY FAVOURITE COLOUR IS BLUE AND I LOVE ANIMALS I HAVE 4 SISTERS I HAVE A DOG NAMED MAC AND HE IS A BESHON CROSS WITH A MOLTES.
I think you forgot to add the blogging rules to your post. One of them is to add TBC in the title then save it to the teacher can check it out. This is so that we can make sure it is ready for the World to see. There are a few things that need to be fixed on your post.
1. Next time - don't use capitals for all the writing. 2. You need to turn the writing into sentences with capitals and full stops. 3. Find out how to spell the breeds of your dog.
I am impressed that you managed your time well and even got a photo embedded on your blog. Great work. Please make the changes then e-mail me to say they are done.
Hi Amelia,
ReplyDeleteI think you forgot to add the blogging rules to your post. One of them is to add TBC in the title then save it to the teacher can check it out. This is so that we can make sure it is ready for the World to see. There are a few things that need to be fixed on your post.
1. Next time - don't use capitals for all the writing.
2. You need to turn the writing into sentences with capitals and full stops.
3. Find out how to spell the breeds of your dog.
I am impressed that you managed your time well and even got a photo embedded on your blog. Great work. Please make the changes then e-mail me to say they are done.
Allana
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